Spring pantoum
This daffodil in our front yard inspired me to write today's pantoum from scratch. That is, I wrote a little poem and *then* plugged it into the formula so my brain wouldn't explode.
I’m glad we’re having an early spring, my little daughter says as we drive to school, down the hills, white petals flying from the windshield where they fell during the night. We count cherry trees in bloom, pink clouds puffing as we drive to school, down the hills, white petals flying under the blue sky, weeping willows drooping over the road. We count cherry trees in bloom, pink clouds puffing. The daffodils back home, bowed down with rain under the blue sky, weeping willows drooping over the road, lift their necks once we’re gone, and stretch their faces to other flowers back home, bowed down with rain surveying spring head on, the quickening. They lift their necks once we’re gone, stretching their faces from the windstorm when they fell during the night. They witness spring head on, the quickening. I’m glad we’re having an early spring, my little daughter says.



Lovely....although I'm not sure what a pantoum is, I do enjoy poetry as it tells what cannot be said if that makes sense.
Great job! Pantoums are so hard to put together so I applaud you for making a good one that really uses the form.