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Daniel Henderson's avatar

This was really cool. I think you nailed this prompt! Each 'yesterday' feels like it's own vignette that tells a story from different times throughout the speaker's life and they all flow together so well. My favorite was especially:

"Yesterday a piece of meteorite fell out of the sky, a blue wheel blazing past our backyard, where I sat with the cordless phone pressed to my cheek."

So mystical and well written! The imagery and description lit my imagination on fire. Well done.

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Rachael Menzie's avatar

Mixed up memories. Perfect.

I'm super curious about the meteorite!

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