of “For Dear Life” offered a prompt on writing place and I ended up writing a poem inspired by her poem featured in that post, “First Fall,” rather than the prompt (which was a good one if anyone is looking for a prompt today). And now, having written the word “prompt” so many times that it has ceased to have meaning… “First Fall” starts with the tender words, “I’m your guide here.”
I'm your guide here. You have no other
(I count your father and I as one).
So within the ellipse of our arms
is all the safety we can give.
It’s not much.
We can't control what crawls outside our oval
and it’s getting scarier all the time. You’re still
losing teeth, the edge of your face still
rounded and soft, an echo of the baby
you were eight years ago.
Your eyes are deep set, deep blue
wide with panic in the mornings
when you have to rejoin the waking world.
It’s so hard out here.
You need knee-pads, elbow-pads, a helmet
and so many kinds of masks
all to keep you
only a little safe.
We have quite a few neighbors who are childless couples here in this mountain community. There is an unbridgeable gulf between them and those of us who have children. They have pets and can “therefore relate to being parents “ but they really don’t. Parents are only as happy as their saddest child.
Wow -- I read through it and around inside it several times and kept finding new shades of meaning and mystery ... "you're still losing teeth" ... "panic" ... "so many kinds of masks" ... and that last line. Magnificent and touching.