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Ann Collins's avatar

The photo! And all the vivid vignettes in this poem—gosh Margaret, you really convey the

hidden layers of beauty in an “ordinary” day and in the way you and your husband stay connected while apart—how delicious! 💛

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Thank you, Ann! 😊

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

This is so random and specific and wonderful, Margaret Ann -- just like the order of the abc's!

(And of course I'm completely curious about what/why your husband was getting sworn in to/for. Which is none of my business and simply makes the poem more random and specific and wonderul.)

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Thank you, Elizabeth! I wanted to try @Kortney Garrison’s challenge but I didn’t know what to write about, so I seized on the first thing I thought of (Dan’s texts that had been entertaining me all day, especially since he went to the ZOO 😁).

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

He knows how to have a good time, your sweetie! 😁

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

😁 He really does!

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Judith Silver's avatar

Love this fun and loving poem. Agree with Ann Collins...."hidden layers of beauty in an "ordinary" day.....the gifted sight of an engaged and wonderful poet.

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Thank you, Mom! I felt kind of like I took the trip with him by the end of the 24 hours 😊.

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

Cracking poem Margaret!! :)

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Thank you, Lisa! 😊 Nothing like an assignment for me 😉.

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Kym VdP's avatar

As I commented on the note, just so good and so fun! I want to give it a go! Maybe I will... I'm camping so it seems a good time for inspiration.

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Camping seems like the perfect time--so much material, and some of it so random to regular life :).

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Kym VdP's avatar

Ah you've inspired me again Margaret. First the villanelle and now a abecedarian! I wrote one this afternoon 🙌🏻 I'm so pleased with it 😁 hehe. Thanks for introducing me to this form!!

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

EEEEK! The chain of poetry continues 💛. Are you going to post it??!

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Kym VdP's avatar

Yes I will soon! It'll be my January post I think 😁

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Yay! 😊

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